【作文要點】
The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
1. 最近興起了一股“山寨熱”
2. 你如何看待山寨現(xiàn)象
●審題概述●
本文是一篇論述山寨現(xiàn)象以及人們和你對此看法的文章。第一段,概述方興未艾的山寨熱。第二段,闡述山寨產(chǎn)品的優(yōu)勢以及給人們帶來的好處。第三段,論述人們和你對山寨現(xiàn)象的反對立場和觀點,即山寨產(chǎn)品的非法性。
【參考范文】
The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation – a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.
【思路點評】
◇第一段思路點評:綜述山寨熱現(xiàn)象。
◇語言點提示:
…public opinions are clearly pided此句起承上啟下的作用
◇第二段思路點評:主要闡述山寨產(chǎn)品的優(yōu)勢。
◇語言點提示:
(1)mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿與創(chuàng)新
(2)respond to the market對市場做出反應(yīng)
◇第三段思路點評:主要闡述對山寨產(chǎn)品侵權(quán)、擾亂市場等方面的看法。
◇語言點提示:
(1)The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌
(2)thrive on茁壯成長、蓬勃發(fā)展、繁榮
(3)legal loopholes法律漏洞(空子)
(4)Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反壟斷口號的偽裝下
(5)violating intellectual property rights違反知識產(chǎn)權(quán)
(6)evading taxes逃稅
(7)plagiarism剽竊、抄襲